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Stretchxpert· Nov 7th
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MrChooseup· Nov 6th
I can't read the dialogue in this one. The text is messy and tiny.
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OwO· Nov 6th
Review - I like this one more than the previous because the general plot is really cute and I like the character designs here, but the same confusing egg-laying does hold it back a bit for me. If the target just had an ovipositor dick that would just immediately fix it for me, but as it is I'll give this a 6.5/10. Better than the previous one but still has some of the same issues.
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Meko· Nov 6th
This is why I only accept upfront payment
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As a WIP I don’t think this is bad at all. Concept art conveys the plot, the idea, and the nsfw scenes well enough. I think this has the potential to be great. Also.. has anyone else noticed that this is totally within the No Man Sky universe??? As a WIP I’d say 7/10 - artwork and dialogue just need polished.